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Post by StarSwirl05 on Apr 23, 2014 16:58:53 GMT -5
He's got comics? Also, have to agree with Notes, yours are alright as summaries, but they could use a bit more meat to them as it were. At the risk of sounding arrogant, think something of what I do with my take on the Tales episodes. Sure do: masteryubel.deviantart.com/art/MLP-Tales-Fanfic-S1E1-Strip-1-2-297320093I'll probably have to break up the lengthy paragraph to be probably two short paragraphs for the summaries so that it's not a wall of text. |
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Post by Notes on Apr 23, 2014 17:01:50 GMT -5
I agree on all points for both of you, bobdude and StarSwirl05. Two shorter paragraphs would be less sore for the eyes. We need to be able to read it easily if we're to understand your summaries. 8)
Speaking of which, though I haven't read all of your comics yet StarSwirl05, I love how you used Mr. Tidwell. I think he's Teddy's dad. l8) Everyone forgets about him and the other oneshot characters, like Corny.
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Post by StarSwirl05 on Apr 23, 2014 17:07:54 GMT -5
I agree on all points for both of you, bobdude and StarSwirl05. Two shorter paragraphs would be less sore for the eyes. We need to be able to read it easily if we're to understand your summaries. 8) Speaking of which, though I haven't read all of your comics yet StarSwirl05, I love how you used Mr. Tidwell. I think he's Teddy's dad. l8) Everyone forgets about him and the other oneshot characters, like Corny. Mr Tidwell is the school janitor actually. Probably could be Teddy's dad though. |
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Post by Notes on Apr 23, 2014 17:10:49 GMT -5
I know that he's the school janitor, but he has a life and a family outside of school. (It might explain why he's so fond of Sweetheart.) But either way, I imagine it'd be funny because of Teddy and Tidwell's contrasts in personality.
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Post by bobdude on Apr 23, 2014 18:02:01 GMT -5
Starswirl: Arts okayish. Also interested in howthat your the guy behind the Puggyville concept, something that you and I share in terms of similar... 'interests' for lack of a better word (my ship fic actually involves Starlight gaining weight ironically). I think I do a pretty good job of keeping my paragraphs fairly short, so feel free to use my reviews as a template of sorts. Also, for those in want of a season two fic, this one isn't too bad, should honestly be a script more then anything if the lack of setting/sensory detail is anything to go by, but I digress. www.fanfiction.net/s/9963710/1/My-Little-Pony-Tales-Season-2 |
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Post by StarSwirl05 on Apr 23, 2014 18:04:52 GMT -5
Starswirl: Arts okayish. Also interested in howthat your the guy behind the Puggyville concept, something that you and I share in terms of similar... 'interests' for lack of a better word (my ship fic actually involves Starlight gaining weight ironically). I think I do a pretty good job of keeping my paragraphs fairly short, so feel free to use my reviews as a template of sorts. Also, for those in want of a season two fic, this one isn't too bad, should honestly be a script more then anything if the lack of setting/sensory detail is anything to go by, but I digress. www.fanfiction.net/s/9963710/1/My-Little-Pony-Tales-Season-2Yeah, I'm not really into being high on the popularity list so I draw how I want to draw not how others want me to draw. |
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Post by Notes on Apr 23, 2014 18:09:03 GMT -5
Darn straight, StarSwirl05!
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Post by StarSwirl05 on Apr 23, 2014 18:11:50 GMT -5
Darn straight, StarSwirl05! It also keeps art thieves away. Are you all just into MLP Tales or are you into, say My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic? I know I'm into MLP FiM, especially Equestria Girls. |
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Post by Notes on Apr 23, 2014 18:16:23 GMT -5
I bet that it does! You've got your priorities straight, Stars! Can I call you that? I'm not used to nicknames. (,3(
I like Friendship is Magic. Thanks to brightglow, I've also watched (and somewhat enjoyed) the G3 specials. I've watched a few G1 proper episodes, but have to watch more. I'm, in a sense, into all of the generations. Tales is still my favorite, though. 8)
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Post by bobdude on Apr 23, 2014 18:17:54 GMT -5
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Post by StarSwirl05 on Apr 23, 2014 18:19:20 GMT -5
I bet that it does! You've got your priorities straight, Stars! Can I call you that? I'm not used to nicknames. (,3( I like Friendship is Magic. Thanks to brightglow, I've also watched (and somewhat enjoyed) the G3 specials. I've watched a few G1 proper episodes, but have to watch more. I'm, in a sense, into all of the generations. Tales is still my favorite, though. 8) G3 is what got me into MLP in the first place. It's partly where my username comes from. |
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Post by Notes on Apr 23, 2014 18:21:09 GMT -5
I haven't read the whole thing. The first chapter has no complaints from me, personally. But if it takes a sad turn or takes the cliche route of "Tales-doctors-lop-wings-and-horns-off-of-newborns-because-they're-sadists," though, I'm going to become despondent.
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Post by Notes on Apr 23, 2014 18:22:34 GMT -5
StarSwirl05 Or so I hear! It's a nice name. Easy to remember, easy to spell.
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Post by StarSwirl05 on Apr 23, 2014 18:26:07 GMT -5
StarSwirl05 Or so I hear! It's a nice name. Easy to remember, easy to spell. It's from the pony that got me into G3 (Star Swirl) and 05, which was the year I joined MLP Arena, a more general MLP board. |
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Post by bobdude on Apr 23, 2014 18:28:44 GMT -5
And to answer your question, I seem to like all the pony gens. yes, even 3.5 (cibi artstyle is cute and this is best dragoness bar none www.youtube.com/watch?v=aIp2zpIb9Bg). and I'm looking forward to Rainbow Rocks, liked the first one alright and god knows I'm a sucker for musicals. |
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