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Post by mlptfan on Apr 24, 2009 14:42:11 GMT -5
I liked the FBI story alot! It's cool how you made Tom get all excited over the cell phone buy! ^^ Yep, cellphone gives them a phone number, GSM phones used in the states can be tracked by Simcard number, or cellphone number. They can also tell you where they are being used, even if just turned on, down to a few hundred yards. And the ponies don't know about it! I just need to read the next part now  |
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Post by kitsy on Apr 24, 2009 15:12:41 GMT -5
Yep, cellphone gives them a phone number, GSM phones used in the states can be tracked by Simcard number, or cellphone number. They can also tell you where they are being used, even if just turned on, down to a few hundred yards. And the ponies don't know about it! I just need to read the next part now So i guess i should take a week or 2 off? *dives for cover* |
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Post by mlptfan on Apr 24, 2009 15:52:25 GMT -5
And the ponies don't know about it! I just need to read the next part now So i guess i should take a week or 2 off? *dives for cover* LOL  |
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Post by kitsy on Apr 24, 2009 21:01:19 GMT -5
Asunder 15
"A great wind was formed of the waters to the south, as it traveled it gained strength over the waves, playing with the dolphins and dancing. The wind turned over the desert, climbing over the hills and breathing in the incense, then settled over an oasis. There it played in the fronds and looked teased the grasses." Carl leaned over teasing Jing-a-ling and Ting-a-ling's mane so they giggled.
"And Allah took a handful of south wind and from it formed a horse, saying, 'I create thee, Oh Arabian. To thy forelock I bind victory in battle. On thy back I set a rich spoil, and a treasure in thy loins. I establish thee flight without wings.'" Smiling Carl stroked their backs looking down at them. "And so began the most celebrated horses of the east, the most powerful and strongest."
Jing-a-ling yawned and snuggled up against the teddy bear Tina gave her, "like story..."
Ting-a-ling nodded hugging the stuffed bunny, "Pretty."
"Thanks dad." Tina yawned laying on her side on her bed.
"Wow, even got you yawning huh." Carl smiled and walked over giving each of the ponies and his daughter a kiss on the for heads "Sleep well little ones."
Tina nodded falling sleep. All 3 of the kids had tired themselves out from the day of play.
Standing Carl walked outside into the cool spring morning, looking up at the sky he watched, shooting stars, satellites, the stars themselves. Softly he spoke, just to himself but still aloud "I hope I can get them back to where they belong somehow, or at least somewhere safe. They deserve better."
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The wind blew from the south, blowing lancers mane and tail, causing them to dance, closing his eyes he looked up at the sky. Familiar yet different, the scents, the sounds, even the stars had a familiar sight to them but looked different then what he knew.
Walking out Brighteyes looked at Lancer, quietly she moved beside him taking the rail of the boat "We will find them. Some how."
"I know, I just feel so useless here at times, I know we needed my boat but I was there was more I could do."
Brighteyes gave him a hug "Your not useless Lancer, I'm glad your here, I couldn't come here alone. Patch is such an adventurer, Brightglow is wise... I might be smart but I don't know allot about this place, and it scares me."
Lancer looked at her and gave her a gentle nuzzle "Me to."
They both heard the loud ring, almost making them jump, Brighteyes dropped to all 4's and lancer turned blinking then picked up the cell phone off the window sill where he put it "Wow thats loud."
Brighteyes giggled and blushed "Yeh."
Checking the face he tilted his head, "Unlisted number," flipping it open he held it to his head "Lancer speaking"
"Who is it?" Brightyes asked.
"Hello? Hello? Theres no one there." Lancer hung up the phone and turned his head hearing someone walking up the gang plank.
Brighteyes blinked and quickly stood up on her hind legs, as a gentlemen in his mid 20's, with red hair and a basic gray and black suit walked up and stopped at the rail.
"Lancer Lefleur?"
"How do you..."
The Gentleman pulled out his badge "Agent Robertson, FBI."
Lancer blinked looking at Brighteyes, as Patch walked out "Police huh?"
"FBI Actually." Tom said looking at Patch.
"Federal bureau of intimidation, er investigation." Patch said with a giggle, then she looked at Brighteyes "TV."
Tom looked at her sternly "And I'm here on business."
Patch giggled but did her best to look innocent.
Lancer looked at Patch then at the agent "Hello sir, welcome to my boat, how did you know my name?"
"Simple, its the name you put on your Cell phone paperwork, even pay as you go phones keep records." Tom said holding up the paperwork.
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Post by Teddy on Apr 24, 2009 21:13:00 GMT -5
*gasp* Oh no, busted! XD
Seriously though, this story just keeps getting better! And you write it so fast! Woo!!
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Post by kitsy on Apr 24, 2009 21:41:51 GMT -5
*gasp* Oh no, busted! XD Seriously though, this story just keeps getting better! And you write it so fast! Woo!! Yeh but there small, its only a page or 2 a day. |
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Post by mlptfan on Apr 25, 2009 17:48:05 GMT -5
part 15 good. Some Islam in there and some FBI, What a mix. XD
Is that story Carl read taken from the Qur’an?
You are brave using it for the story o.o;;;;;;
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Post by kitsy on Apr 25, 2009 17:59:38 GMT -5
part 15 good. Some Islam in there and some FBI, What a mix. XD Is that story Carl read taken from the Qur’an? You are brave using it for the story o.o;;;;;; *dodges to the left* Its an Ancient Bedouin Legend. The bedouin people worship and honor the horse as a gift from allah. I'm safe on that one  |
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Post by mlptfan on Apr 25, 2009 18:05:09 GMT -5
part 15 good. Some Islam in there and some FBI, What a mix. XD Is that story Carl read taken from the Qur’an? You are brave using it for the story o.o;;;;;; *dodges to the left* Its an Ancient Bedouin Legend. The bedouin people worship and honor the horse as a gift from allah. I'm safe on that one Okay Good call! Good to be on the safe side, LOL! |
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Post by kitsy on Apr 25, 2009 18:26:36 GMT -5
*dodges to the left* Its an Ancient Bedouin Legend. The bedouin people worship and honor the horse as a gift from allah. I'm safe on that one Okay Good call! Good to be on the safe side, LOL! Though I studied alot of religions... I'm more likely to get the christian right upset with me |
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Post by kitsy on Apr 28, 2009 10:28:09 GMT -5
Asunder 16
Sweetheart walked beside Stardancer looking around at the castle and buildings "You've only been here once before? Its really and truly beautiful."
"Yeah, but every unicorn knows her way back to here, its a very magical place." Stardancer said.
"The others are trying to decide what to do next, we have to get word to Patch, Lancer, Brighteyes, and Brightglow, about what we found so they can try and stop things on their side." Sweetheart looked down and sighed.
Stardancer nodded slowly "Your worried about them, and the others, I can tell."
"Unicorn magic?" Sweetheart asked looking sideways at her.
"Naw, you wear your feelings on your body, for everyone to see." Rounding the corner of a building Stardancer and Sweetheart saw Rarity, bounding around Teddy a bit in the distance, talking to him, it was to far to make out what they were saying though. "I don't think Rarity has ever seen a boy pony before."
Sweetheart blinked "She hasn't?"
"She's only been out of unicornia once, and then for a very short time, she's a princess here." Stardancer said and looked over as Lilly and Starlight came over. "Hey you two."
"Happyglow and Starglow are flying back to get in touch with Dazzleglow, to carry the news of what we found, now we need to find an ancient crystal that might help us." Starlight said.
Sweetheart nodded half listening, watching as Rarity hugged Teddy around the neck kissing his cheek. "So we should get going then right away?"
Starlight shook her head "We need to wait for Happyglow and Starglow to get back. Besides it seems like a nice place to rest."
"Oh." Sweetheart took her eyes off Rarity and Teddy "I should get washed up, I really and truly feel icky after that long walk."
"I'll take you to the hot tub." Lilly said looking at her. "Rarity seems curious about your friend Sweetheart."
Sweetheart glanced over then looked to Lilly, "I know its bad but, I kinda wish she wasn't."
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Agent Robertson Glanced at the printed photo then to Lancer raising an eyebrow "We received this photo of you 4 when you were buying your cellphone."
Brighteyes blinked and asked "Is there something wrong with purchasing a phone sir?"
"Nope, to me everything looks normal, 3 teens and an adult buying a pay as you go phone, and some stuff for school." He said looking around the boat, noting slight differences here and there.
Lancer moved to be in the agents line of sight again, "Is there something wrong with that? The prices were really nice there."
"Oh I understand, there's only one small problem. Back at the office the picture looked... Different."
Brightglow blinked "Different how."
"Well, at the office, the older woman, you, had or have brown and white wings, mane, tail." Looking up at Brightglow.
Taking a step back Brightglow gulped "I do?"
"The interesting part is, the picture shows how you look now, but at the office it showed you as the Equines of some sort." He held the picture for them to see.
"Interesting, it seems the effect of the crystals is mental, even pictures and camera images appear changed but only as long as we are around." Brighteyes said tilting her head.
Patch sighted putting her hoof over her face "Brighteyes."
"What?" Brighteyes blinked looking at patch.
"Well I think Lancer and Brightglow were going to try and talk their way out of this."
Tom handed Brightglow the photo "What effect."
Brighteyes looked to Brightglow who just nodded to her now with a sigh, "Well we were given gems to make us appear human, humans see us as one of them."
"We came here though a rift in the ocean south of here, ber mu da... triangle." Patch glanced to Brighteyes "TV. We came looking for 2 little ponies, Jing-a-ling and Ting-a-ling, who were taken here."
"Taken?" Tom looked at Patch.
"Yes sir in some kind of lightning storm, they were transported along with about 1.3 tons of earth at the park where they were playing, it something is going on here, thats affecting our home." Brighteyes said and looked at Patch "Internet and science."
Lancer shook his head at the girls "I borrowed my fathers Yacht, and used my allowance to pay for things, we are trying to get the twins back, their mom and sister are in a mess, worried about them."
"Allowance?" He said looking to lancer.
"Lancers dad is rich, he's probably one of the richest ponies back home." Patch said.
"The coins we use, high content gold, we've been using some to pay for repairs to the boat, as well as to buy things we need or can use."
"Two ponies. Currently we are on the look out for a man that stole 2 equines... ponies, from a cooperation. It might be the missing pieces to the puzzle, and why the director wants the ponies killed."
All 3 girls and Lancer looked up at once "Killed!"
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"Kill it, its an abomination!" The villagers ran with pitchforks and torches. "It must die!" Lightning flashed and thunder rolled, "Unholy soulless creation!"
Jing-a-ling whimpered hiding under the covers with Ting-a-ling.
One of the villagers threw a torch lighting hay on fire, "Demon! Monster"
"Oh thats enough of that." Carl said walking over.
"Daaaaad." Tina complained looking up as he turned off the TV.
"Frankenstein is not good for little ponies. Look how scared they are." He said kneeling down and hugging them both.
Tina looked at the little ones and sighed, "I'm sorry you two, I didn't think it was that scary."
"I know, we have some caramel apples in the fridge, why not get one for yourself and the twins hun."
Tina nodded and got the apples coming back over and helped Jing-a-ling eat one, while Carl helped Ting-a-ling with hers.
"I'm sorry you two." She said stroking Ting-a-lings mane.
"It kay... scary.... why they pick on franky... he not bad." Ting asked looking up.
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Post by mlptfan on Apr 28, 2009 10:47:09 GMT -5
Sweetheart won't go insane, will she? XD
And how will Tom take this imaginary pony story?
Tune in for the breathtaking season finale, 33rd of October 2009!
XD
Part 16 was good! ^^
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Post by kitsy on Apr 28, 2009 10:52:35 GMT -5
Sweetheart won't go insane, will she? XD And how will Tom take this imaginary pony story? Tune in for the breathtaking season finale, 33rd of October 2009! XD Part 16 was good! ^^ Well if you want i can put it on hold till then |
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Post by mlptfan on Apr 28, 2009 11:04:18 GMT -5
Sweetheart won't go insane, will she? XD And how will Tom take this imaginary pony story? Tune in for the breathtaking season finale, 33rd of October 2009! XD Part 16 was good! ^^ Well if you want i can put it on hold till then There is no 33th of October. Also part 17 might not be the season finale. I was just playing around |
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Post by kitsy on Apr 28, 2009 11:21:51 GMT -5
Well if you want i can put it on hold till then There is no 33th of October. Also part 17 might not be the season finale. I was just playing around I know, me too |
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