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Post by brightglow on Apr 17, 2009 4:28:42 GMT -5
Very intresting chapters I like the last sentence: "Jing-a-ling looked to the window then looked up at tina. "Do I have soul?""
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Post by kitsy on Apr 17, 2009 5:17:02 GMT -5
Very intresting chapters I like the last sentence: "Jing-a-ling looked to the window then looked up at tina. "Do I have soul?"" *curtsies* thank you, chose to leave it there, to let the reader think and choose. |
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Post by mlptfan on Apr 17, 2009 18:17:10 GMT -5
^^;; Much to read this time. Very good parts!
Feel free to take longer braks between parts, or I might get behind, having to catch up.
I still like the scenes with the director the most!
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Post by kitsy on Apr 17, 2009 19:42:21 GMT -5
^^;; Much to read this time. Very good parts! Feel free to take longer braks between parts, or I might get behind, having to catch up. I still like the scenes with the director the most! He's a nice villian, sorta generating more and more of a history as the story goes on, rather then hitting people with everything at once. |
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Post by kitsy on Apr 21, 2009 8:21:51 GMT -5
Asunder 11
"2 Legs Brighteyes." Patch said
Brighteyes blinked and stood up on her hind legs with a sigh, "I know I know, I was just resting."
Brightglow looked over and nodded "Problem is humans only walk or stand on 2 legs, while the heartstones will make us appear to them as human, we still need to act like one, that means being careful to keep our tails out of the way, and walk on 2 legs."
Lancer walked in, satchel over his shoulder closing the flap, when Patch took it off him. "Hey, I need that."
"I'm carrying it Lancer." Patch said putting it on herself and adjusted the straps.
"I'm strong enough to carry my own things, Patch." Lancer put his houves on his hips looking at her.
"Yeh but I noticed on TV, the females carry purses, the side satchal might look like a purse to the humans, so best one of us girls carry it." Patch said, then looked at Brighteyes "What? I did learn somethings from TV."
Brightglow giggled "Yep, so you have an idea of customs and culture."
Patch nodded "Yep, but best we not try and pretend to be them, instead just be ourselves, from what I saw, they seem to be more sensitive to people who pretend or try and act like them over people who just talk different."
Brightglow nodded keeping her wings tight to her side "Makes sence I guess."
Brighteyes closed the laptop looking confused "Techknogicaly they are very simular to us, though they tend to be more Theocratically orinated." Before Patch could even awnser, Brighteyes looked at her "It means they belive in religion, that a higher power controls most to all of their actions and fait."
Patch nodded slowly.
"I found something strange through, they have stories of unicorns, pegasus, as well as stories of wizards, dragons, mages, and such. Like our stories, very simular, but it seems at some point in time, there was a divergence, where new creatures and monsters were talked about, it like we were culturally close untill some turning point in their history, when they went one way creating more and more, creatures, and we kept what we had."
"Wierd" Patch said.
Turning the group headded into the town, staying togeather they looked at the stores, cars, and people. Trying their best to avoid big crouds where people would brush up against them they made their way into the shoping district, almost in awe about the number of people.
"This could take a while."
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"They have gone off the grid." Agent Robertson said.
The director turned the chair to face the window leaning back.
"He is a terrorest, did you expect it to be easy?"
"His cellphone was cancled, though he may be using Pay as you Go service. He closed his bank account, withdrawing all of his money in cash, credit cards were cancled at the time the accounts were closed. We found the company car that he stole at the camp ground, but the trailer park staff said he had settled his account and moved on."
"I see, sounds like he had this planned for a while." The director said.
"Maybe, though he still has left alot of things behind, my guess is he was rushed, or wasn't expecting to have to leave so soon, something changed his plans."
"Well, thank you for your report Agent Robertson, hopefully we can stop this mad man before he accidently or on purpose unleases this on a populated area."
The agent stood nodding and headed out, tapping the intercome on his chair the director shook his head "Hold my calls."
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Teddy walked beside Sweetheart keeping an eye on her to make sure she was safe.
"Unicornia is about a 2 day walk from here, the city is almost compleatly populated by unicorns." Stardancer said as she walked.
"Wow, how meny are there." Bon bon asked, looking to them.
"Oh lots, its a big city, theres probably 30 unicorns there."
Ace blinked looking at Starlight "30? Shetland mills has a population of over 300, and thats a small town."
Starlight nodded "I know, but they don't seem to have the industrial base we do, so I figure their towns are limited by what they can feed."
Ace nodded "I hadn't thought of that."
"It was the same way for the early pony settlers back home, they spread out across the mainland and islands because it was easier at the time to feed small groups." Starlight glanced to Bon Bon who was munchng on an apple "Or one pony."
Bon Bon blinked "What?"
"Bon Bon, you need to ration the food more, if you eat it all now, you'll be more hungery later on in the trip." Ace said nodding to her once.
"I know, I just get hungery at times, eating calms me down."
Sweetheart nuzzled Bon Bon once "Its ok Bon Bon we really and truelly understand."
The 2 pegasus walked side by side listening to the girls talk, occationally glancing at each other.
Clover looked at happyglow "Its ok to talk too, we chat alot, and we don't want you to feal left out."
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Post by brightglow on Apr 21, 2009 15:19:36 GMT -5
Yay Unicornia!! My persona Ice Cream Surprise lives there.  I can't wait to know how Unicornia looks like in your story and whou rules there. As I know Unicornia lies in the Mountains so it's not a big surprise that they have small population. |
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Post by kitsy on Apr 21, 2009 16:04:26 GMT -5
Yay Unicornia!! My persona Ice Cream Surprise lives there. I can't wait to know how Unicornia looks like in your story and whou rules there. As I know Unicornia lies in the Mountains so it's not a big surprise that they have small population. Yep, and without big trade routes, and such populatino is limited  |
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Post by brightglow on Apr 21, 2009 16:56:17 GMT -5
I think there are just a bit more unicorns than at Dream valley, but I guess that's only my opinian since I only know those unicorns who are at the G1 and G3 cartoons.
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Post by kitsy on Apr 21, 2009 18:00:51 GMT -5
Jing-a-ling and Ting-a-ling lay watching TV giggling, as tina came in sitting down, an older cartoon about magical horses was on tv, and it seemed to have the girls entertained. Sitting between them Tina rubbed both their backs, "You two ok?" supprised no one commented on that |
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Post by mlptfan on Apr 21, 2009 18:27:30 GMT -5
Great part 11 was! ^^ It means they belive in religion, that a higher power controls most to all of their actions and fait. Eww. This is very "American". I found something strange through, they have stories of unicorns, pegasus, as well as stories of wizards, dragons, mages, and such. Like our stories, very simular, but it seems at some point in time, there was a divergence, where new creatures and monsters were talked about, it like we were culturally close untill some turning point in their history, when they went one way creating more and more, creatures, and we kept what we had. Awesome! Great stuff! Cool Agent Robertson character ^^ |
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Post by kitsy on Apr 21, 2009 22:15:18 GMT -5
Great part 11 was! ^^ It means they belive in religion, that a higher power controls most to all of their actions and fate. Eww. This is very "American". And I'm not even american I found something strange through, they have stories of unicorns, pegasus, as well as stories of wizards, dragons, mages, and such. Like our stories, very simular, but it seems at some point in time, there was a divergence, where new creatures and monsters were talked about, it like we were culturally close untill some turning point in their history, when they went one way creating more and more, creatures, and we kept what we had. Awesome! Great stuff! Cool Agent Robertson character ^^ Thanks, thats more a prep for information coming later on ... |
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Post by kitsy on Apr 22, 2009 12:00:07 GMT -5
Asunder 12
Carl leaned back in the chair against the camper, no one seemed to be around, alot of these side roads, had no cars for miles. Massive interstate highways had spelled the death for alot of the comunities served by smaller roads like this, and since the last few hurricanes, meny of the last holdouts had simply never returned, having nothing left to return to. Staying to these roads, visiting only small towns along the way, he had been able to avoid most contact.
Ting-a-ling came over panting softly and sat beside Carl looking up at hi, smiling softly Carl handed her a bottle of apple juice. "Its a litle hot and humid to run around playing like that for to long."
"I kay." Ting giggled as Jing-a-ling came over too.
Pulling out anouther bottle he handed it to Jing-a-ling so she could cool off too, softly running his hand down her mane, "Sit and rest abit Jing, catch your breath, we have the rest of the day for you to play here."
Tina headed into the camper and came out with a pop sitting down panting, her t-shirt soaked "I can bearly keep up with those two. I thought I was hyper."
"You are, hun, trust me, you are." Carl said with a chuckle.
Tina glaired at him "Gee thanks."
"Welcome. Glad I picked up that soccer ball?" carl gave Ting-a-lings mane a gentle stroke looking to her.
Ting giggled and nodded "Fun, like home, we play soccer there too."
"Oh? Whats it like there?"
Jing looked up "Starlight, Patch, Ace, Teddy, Lancer, all play it at school."
Tina looked at them "You have school?"
Both girls nod, "Supposed to start going next year."
Carl chuckled, "What do they teach in school?"
Jing-a-ling titled her head thinking "Not know... Melodey does lot of boring stuff like counting, writeing, and other homework."
Ting-a-ling nodded "She hate it, say worst part. She prefer Plays where she act as princess, or music with rockband she in."
Tina smiled "Rock band?"
"Rock'n'beats. They win award."
Both girls giggled looking at each other and started singing Sweet Music.
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"Music... oh sweet music, beautiful harmonies abound..."
Ace cringed slightly "Oh clover, please don't that was pretty mangled."
"Hey I may not be Melodey but I still sing better then Brighteyes."
"Thats not saying much," Teddy chuckled softly, "wow look at that."
The group paused looking up as the castle spires rose in the distance, the trail had been going uphill along the mountain sides for hours, but they finally had their destination in sight. The castle was at the top of the mountain, almost in the clouds today, Its walls a mix of pink and blue stone. Below the castle a small village, of about a dozen houses, several bridges stretched over gorge and waterfall. The buildings were decorated with hearts, occational rainbows, and clouds.
"Oh its so extraspeically pretty." Sweetheart said looking around wide eyed.
Stardancer nodded "They worked hard decorating it."
"Is me me ace or is it just way to... pink and cuddly?" Teddy said looking around.
Ace nodded "Yeh actually, we use pink paint in some buildings, but not... this much. Must be the stone they use."
Stardancer blinked "Whats wrong with pink?"
"Oh nothing," Ace said, "just not used to seeing everything this..."
"Girly." Teddy said with a chuckle, before getting swatted by Starlight, "Hey its true."
"Be nice Teddy, its their culture, and we are the guests here." Starlight said sternly.
"Yes Mrs Hackeny." Teddy replied.
Coming up the ledge verious unicorns worked at cooking, some painted, others were playing games. Ace and Teddy looked at each other, then to Stardancer who was walking twards the castle. Ace trotted up close to her as Teddy stayed close to sweetheart. Pulling beside Stardancer he spooke softly to her.
"Stardancer, is it just me or are there no boys around?"
Stardancer blinked looking at ace "Its just unicorns here."
"Ok, and no boy unicorns?"
"Silly, theres no such thing as boy unicorns. All unicorns are girls."
Teddy blinked "Well that explains the pink."
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"Ace?"
Brighteyes blinked looking over at Patch, "What?"
Patch pointed at the tv, "The blue guy with the tail, talking to the female with red and white hair, he kinda sounds like Ace doesn't he?"
Brighteyes blinked listening for a moment then nodded, "Yeh, he does actually, nightcrawler... wierd."
Lancer picked up the radio and phone, from the store clerk and offered them to Brighteyes to put in the satchel. "Naw, ace has a softer voice."
The girls giggled at Lancer, "No, you've definatly got the softer voice."
"I ment compaired to that guy."
Brightglow walked over keeping an eye on things around her, "Come on Patch, I am a little nervous in here."
Patch nodded and they headed out into the city again, looking down Brighteyes sighed "So much litter, so much smoke and dust."
Starlight moved beside Brighteyes "Bugs me too abit, like no one cares about the enviroment here at all."
"Big cities always generate some litter, guess this is a really big city." Patch said.
Brightglow nodded "Lets get back to the boat."
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Post by brightglow on Apr 22, 2009 14:14:48 GMT -5
Yay, they are amost in Unicornia. I can't wait to find out if there will be any familiar unicorns there (from the G3 Runaway Rainbow and Come back Lily Lightly) and I wonder if unicors will be as playful as they are at the G3 MLP movies.
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Post by kitsy on Apr 22, 2009 14:57:43 GMT -5
Yay, they are amost in Unicornia. I can't wait to find out if there will be any familiar unicorns there (from the G3 Runaway Rainbow and Come back Lily Lightly) and I wonder if unicors will be as playful as they are at the G3 MLP movies. And all girls |
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Post by mlptfan on Apr 22, 2009 18:17:08 GMT -5
Yay, they are amost in Unicornia. I can't wait to find out if there will be any familiar unicorns there (from the G3 Runaway Rainbow and Come back Lily Lightly) and I wonder if unicors will be as playful as they are at the G3 MLP movies. And all girls lol, all girls you say? Doesn't that mean trouble for Teddy? I see a jealous Sweetheart prediction here  |
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I can't wait to know how Unicornia looks like in your story and whou rules there. As I know Unicornia lies in the Mountains so it's not a big surprise that they have small population.
