MLP Tales Comic [DISCONTINUED]

[Mari]

As of today, I am officially CANCELLING the comic. It takes up way too much of my time...

BUT LAMENT NOT!

The story continues! Just head over to the fanfiction section to see what I am talking about...



As for the comic itself, I will try and work on it as much as I can. I am still figuring out techniques that would work best for doing it, but you should see a more steady style soon enough once I get comfortable.

The comic itself focuses on Sweetheart, Teddy, and Patch (with appearances from the rest of the characters of course). It will be a more dramatic storyline told mostly from the perspective of Sweetheart.

I have decided to draw the characters for my comic in an anthro-pony form because I find it too difficult to try and draw a pony holding a pencil or whatever with a 'hoof'... it doesn't make sense to me...
But to make sure there is always an equal amount of nonsense, these antrho ponies won't be wearing any human-like clothes.


The first few pages are more of a prologue to give a brief backstory, which is why the first page is a subdued black and white. <3

[mlptfan]

Oh wow! Awesome o.o

[brightglow]

Wow, It is so realistic,I can really feel Sweetheart's pain. I'm sure Teddy didn't tell it to Sweetheart personally because he didn't want hert his girlfriend,but he left his precious Teddy bear.

The picture above the window really fit to the whole picture's mood.

[mlptfan]

I know it takes long time to draw a page, but I need more! *shot*

I'll wait

[drusilla]

Oh my goodness. This is going to be some kind of soap opera i just must watch again and again.

Amazing job, I love the stlye of drawing and colors.

[Mari]

Updated.

I will try and have weekly updates for this comic.

[mlptfan]

Holy smoke, there's Patch of course ^^

Very well done mari. keep it up. Must have more!


EDIT:
The dialog in the newest page (4) has increased the addiction level of this comic a lot!

[brightglow]

Wow! A new page! I really like it. I lways knew Bon Bon won't be a model, but I never thought Patch will be a Police Officer. I can't wait to find out what will be Teddy's job. In the Masquerade he was a pirate,but it isn't a normal job and I don't think Teddy would work illegally.

Now I wonder what about Lancer too?

The weekly update would be perfect,but it won't be a problem if you'll be delay.

[Mari]

Dec 4, 2008 10:53:43 GMT -5 brightglow said:

Wow! A new page! I really like it. I lways knew Bon Bon won't be a model, but I never thought Patch will be a Police Officer. I can't wait to find out what will be Teddy's job. In the Masquerade he was a pirate,but it isn't a normal job and I don't think Teddy would work illegally.

Now I wonder what about Lancer too?

The weekly update would be perfect,but it won't be a problem if you'll be delay.

Haha! Oh dear! I forgot Lancer! I knew I was forgeting someone!

He's studying to be lawyer.... but that's not really a plot point... haha oops.

<3

[mlptfan]

Bon Bon's cafe and bakery. I just noticed it. You are good at 3D art!

And the way you choose to include Patch as a main character, that's really good!

[brightglow]

Dec 4, 2008 13:31:59 GMT -5 Mari said:

Dec 4, 2008 10:53:43 GMT -5 brightglow said:

Wow! A new page! I really like it. I lways knew Bon Bon won't be a model, but I never thought Patch will be a Police Officer. I can't wait to find out what will be Teddy's job. In the Masquerade he was a pirate,but it isn't a normal job and I don't think Teddy would work illegally.

Now I wonder what about Lancer too?

The weekly update would be perfect,but it won't be a problem if you'll be delay.

Haha! Oh dear! I forgot Lancer! I knew I was forgeting someone!

He's studying to be lawyer.... but that's not really a plot point... haha oops.

<3

No problem maybe they talk about Lancer afther Teddy and soon they talk about the boys and we learn what happened whit the Starlight-Ace and Brighteyes-Lancer copules, won't we?

[Mari]

Perhaps, but the other couples are not really my focus for this story.

[brightglow]

I understand that. Maybe Patch and Sweetheart could mention the other copules as they are talking in the café.

[mlptfan]

Dec 4, 2008 15:25:43 GMT -5 brightglow said:

I understand that. Maybe Patch and Sweetheart could mention the other copules as they are talking in the café.

If you notice, the last line in page 4 is ", Teddy...". It means that the next page will focus on him, but how we won't know until next update. It would be awkward to just talk about Teddy as "one of the gang" and keep continue talking about others when the story is about Sweetheart and Teddy, and she will obviously react to herself saying Teddy's name out loud.

This is drama on a high level! Don't try to change that

[brightglow]

Well at the moment I'm a little confuse,because Sweetheart's face looks happy when she talks about her old friends,but I think It will be chance and maybe she will be change the topic because she didn't want to talk about Teddy.

It's intrestin in the first two cells of the 4th page she looks sad,but she looks happy in the 4th cell she looks happy,and I noticed Patch's eyes are pink and not yellow.