My MLP Tales Fanfic Movie: Of Mare and Moon

[StarSwirl05]

A brand new fanfic I wrote that is broken up into 26 episodes for added suspense. I've shown a flashback by having all dialogue associated with that flasback in bold. Here's the link:
www.fanfiction.net/s/7036379/1/Of_Mare_and_Moon
There will be more coming but in the meantime, tell me what you think